Hell I have a paper that is already started in asa format however I need to add to it be deeper to this is the comments i got back from the first paper It needs to use existing secondary data to answer your research question, and students don’t need to collect their own data. 3 pts (1%): Clearly explain how the concepts are used to make sense of the paper based on class materials and the literature review from current empirical studies to provide a clear sociological perspective on your topic. However, your research questions are not clear, and I didn’t see the discussion of your data, and future steps are also not clear. You need to discuss data and method with more detail in Paper 2. 3 pts (1%) Developing an argument regarding a key issue for future research on your topic, i.e, how to find the percentage of cohabitation from data. What kind of data can answer your research question? Your research questions are not clear and there are several studies that have the same research topics as yours.
