Write a Freighting Sentences:
The Freighting sentence must be grammatically correct, a minimum of five typed lines long using 12pt. font, one-inch margins, and limited to one compound—if any; there is no limit for subordinators (“which, who, that, while, when, where, because” and others) to attach clauses while avoiding splices and fused sentences (run-ons).
Vary the use of the technique, Freighting and modifying different elements while covering different topics, interests and subject matter appropriate to the form.
One Telescoping Sentence:
Include grammatically correct, multiple, “zoomed” clauses and be grammatically correct, a minimum of five typed lines long, limited to one compound (if any) with a comma and fanboys or a semi-colon.
Consider including a “zoomed” clause that is a simile.
Reintroduce the element from the previous on which you are zooming.
Choose a subject appropriate to the form: moving closer and closer on a physical descriiption, tracing someone’s logic or psychology.