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agree that confidence is your own authority because my experience shows that when you have more experience in any filed your develop more confidence and more creativity
I agree that confidence and academic experience is major factor in this article but a point that needs emphasizing is how to develop Confidence in a younger or beginner writers .
three topics are addressed in the article that you can use to support your best thesis statement?
the difference between Janet and Roger (age- gender – experience- teaching method)
how Janet was an outsider looking in and how knowledge is claim can be tested
how teaching towards authority is a main factor in Janet situation that if she had the right gaudiness and had some knowledge in the subject she would have more Confidence in her writing